School is important because you learn to treat others with kindness.
School is important because we learn to socialize with other people.
School is important because it gives you a better future.
School is important because you get to learn the virtues.
I believe that school is important. A school is a place I go to so I can learn.
Firstly, school is important because you learn to treat others with kindness. In the past, we already learned kindness so that means that when we have a job interview we don’t feel rejected.
Secondly, school is important because we learn how to socialize with other people. In the future, it is good to socialize with other people because if we don’t socialize with other people then they won’t know who you are or no-one will notice you.
Thirdly, school is important because it gives you a better future. If we have good education then in the future you could start your own business or you could be a doctor, work in an office or you could do anything. If you have good education then you can earn more money to help your family or to help the poor.
Lastly, school is important because I get to learn the virtues of our school. The virtues of our school are Faith, Hope, and Love. We have to love everyone, have faith and we need hope. If you love someone then they will love others.
We are lucky to be educated because other people don’t get educated.
I can see you are able to structure your explanation writing well. We are going to work on using different sentence structure. Keep on trying.
ReplyDeleteThank you, next time I will try and structure my writing.
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ReplyDeleteHi solomone I like how you put in paragraphs and make seance and so the reader can understand you
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU Zenith there are a few mistakes in your comment but anyway thank you.
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ReplyDeletemy name is Dereon and I strongly agree with why school is important. If there was no school we wouldn't be conversating right now. by the way, great work!
Thank you Dereon, but it's true if there was no school then we wouldn't be here and we would be struggling.
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