An admirable person is someone that looks up to someone that works hard and has talents. I look up to my mum.
Firstly, I admire my mum because she works hard to provide for me. Whenever she comes home she is tired. Sometimes when she comes home she tells us that her legs hurt from standing all day at work. When she comes home she comes with food so that we don’t get hungry.
Secondly, I admire my mum because she looks after me. During the weekends she stays with me when there is no one to look after me. Sometimes when she is busy she'll take me with her to meetings and other business.
Thirdly I admire my mum because she always comforts me in difficult times. When I cry my mother is always there right beside me. She comforts me until I feel better. When I am going through bad times she is there beside me she always comforts me.
Lastly, I admire my mum because she is a great cook. When I come from the park she already prepares dinner. Sometimes I come home and food is already on the table. I feel happy to have her as my mother.
Great work Solomone keep itup
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ReplyDeleteHello Solomone I like what you did and it look very nice I think I like Number 4 the most but they are all great keep up the great work.😃
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DeleteHELLO Solomone i like your work and your great piece of writing.I like the way you wrote that it is very nice keep up the good work Solomone
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DeleteHi solomone I like your admirable person, and I like your writing about your admirable person because she seem special to you and important :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Aurora, my mother is special to me but anyways thank you!
DeleteHi my name is Joseph. I'm from otaki college. I like your writing your mum sounds amazing like mine. I hope your mum's legs get better.
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